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~RaykonMalone 

Better Off..

Sat Dec 18, 2004, 8:05 PM
I know that you listen,
But do you even care?
Too busy doing this
Too busy being there.

Are we better of the way we were,
Just beind friendly?
Or would your eyes tear and blur,
If you were left without me?

Would you even notice,
noticed if I cried?
I'm so hurt,
Wondering why you lied.

Lied about the love you feel
I know longer know what's real

Do you think we're better,
The way we used to be
You distant and so far away from me?
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  • Current Residence: Missouri
  • Interests: Laughing
  • Favourite band or musician: Chosen Few
  • Favourite genre of music: anything
  • Favourite poet or writer: George Carlin
  • Shell of choice: Mascacholli :D
  • Skin of choice: Smooth?
  • Favourite cartoon character: Darkwing Duck
  • Personal Quote: "Why give up when you can try and lose again?"
  • Tools of the Trade: pen and pure emotion

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~LostbutLiving Dec 8, 2004, 7:17:02 PM
P.S. Thanks for the watch!

Please help!

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I take hit after hit in perfect stride
You'd never see how it effects my pride.
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~RaykonMalone Dec 8, 2004, 7:18:33 PM
lol Ok. I have to go now though.. I'll talk to you this weekend.... By the way... How did you find my account?

And your welcome for the watch... I really like your poem... I can completly relate with that.
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~LostbutLiving Dec 8, 2004, 7:28:12 PM
I honestly have no idea how I got to your page, but I got to "Happiness" and I read it and liked it, you may noticed I commented. You seem to be an accomplished poet and I was hoping you could help a troubled girl put her feelings on paper.

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I take hit after hit in perfect stride
You'd never see how it effects my pride.
:iconraykonmalone:
~RaykonMalone Dec 9, 2004, 1:51:26 PM
...Well thank you. But I'm far from an accomplished poet...
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~LostbutLiving Dec 8, 2004, 7:23:49 PM
Really what happened with you? I screwed up bad. Ripped a guys heart out and stamped on it I guess you could say, and now I want him back but he wouldn't have me if I tried.

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I take hit after hit in perfect stride
You'd never see how it effects my pride.
:iconraykonmalone:
~RaykonMalone Dec 9, 2004, 1:52:48 PM
Ahh.. Broke up with the girl I love, needed her back, then she started going out with my best friend, now she has feelings for me again, and doesn't know if it's better with him or me... So yea. Life's a bitch.
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~LostbutLiving Dec 9, 2004, 8:40:30 PM
That sucks for you, why would you break up with someone you love? ...That's just stupid. No offense of course.

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I take hit after hit in perfect stride
You'd never see how it effects my pride.
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